It's All About You,

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    Another old one, which no longer stands true. It's a long story, if you wish to know, email me and I will say. I do hope one day that I can feel that way for someone once again though....

    It's All About You,

    I think you are wonderful,
    I think you could be a handful,
    I think you are something special,
    In my eyes that is,
    I love it when you laugh,
    I love it when you cut up,
    I love it that you care,
    I love it that you are always there,
    I smile when I think of you,
    I smile when I listen to you,
    I know I think alot,
    Hey why not,
    It's all about you,

    I would give anything for you,
    I would lay my life down for you,
    I would give my last breathe for you,
    If you were down,
    I would pick you up off of the ground,
    If you were sad,
    I would do my best to make you glad,
    If someone hurt you,
    I would make them pay,
    Hey why not,
    It's all about you,

    If you need something,
    I would give everything,
    If you need nothing,
    I would still give something,
    If you needed money,
    Honey not saying that you would,
    I would give as much as I could,
    Hey why not,
    It's all about you,

    If you want a cabin in the woods,
    I would make it,
    How you wanted if I could,
    If you wanted the stars,
    I would get into my car,
    Drive as fast,
    As far as I could,
    Just to get them for you,
    Hey why not,
    It's all about you,

    You are the glimmer,
    That's in my eye,
    You are the sun,
    That's in my day,
    You are everything to me,
    I will always want to be,
    Together with you,
    Through out the happiness,
    Trudging through the sad,
    I will be the one,
    Holding your hair when you are sick,
    I will be the one that will kick,
    The guys *ss because he made you mad,
    I will be the one massaging your back,
    When it achingly hurts,
    I will be the comedian that makes you laugh,
    When you are down and sad,
    Why not,
    It's all about you,

    I'm sorry if I ever make you mad,
    I am glad when you are glad,
    I am sad when you are sad,
    Thus for mad when you are mad,
    I don't want you to give up anything for me,
    We can just let everything be,
    I will always Love you,
    Hey why not,
    It's all about you,

    You are the reason I wake up in the morning,
    You are the reason I am always happy,
    Instead of hurting or mourning,
    I would love to kiss you in the rain,
    Play in the morning dew,
    Just cuddle up next to you,
    As long as you are happy that is what I will do,
    Hey why not,
    That's how much I love you,
    Thus for it's All About You....

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    Zephyr commented on It's All About You,

    08-31-2009

    So beautiful... She must've been very special to you. Very well done, sir. Keep writing!

    am2anangel commented on It's All About You,

    08-27-2009

    Excellent piece very poignant and touching. To be loved this deeply would be a dream come true for many. The passion you show for the one you love is commendable. Great job. I enjoyed.

    photochick commented on It's All About You,

    08-26-2009

    really enjoyed this one full of emotion and passion from the heart and soul very touching grand rhythm and flow great job keep on writing this is a great love poemk

    bforibus commented on It's All About You,

    08-26-2009

    this wud be an excellent vow at a wedding. its simple and to the point. but beautiful enough to feel in the heart good job

    BooTz commented on It's All About You,

    08-26-2009

    i like this poem a lot.the flow is great! it's very heartfelt & sweet poem. this is what makes women swoon. very well done

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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