*** IT'S NOW YOUR TURN***

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    And life goe's on!

    *** IT'S NOW YOUR TURN***

    And now the shoes on the other foot
    So now you know just how I feel,
    Your cards of life are a losing hand
    And you want another deal.

    What goes round, comes around
    In your case, this rings true,
    And you're the one thats hurting
    Now that I'm leaving you.

    You moped around with that sad face
    Crying, ohh me...Ohh my,
    Send back your tears to the crocodile
    That tought you how to cry.

    Try to fool me with your sad routine
    So you may as well admit,
    You'll never know what true love was
    It's your turn,.....get over it.

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    orsonav commented on *** IT'S NOW YOUR TURN***

    01-03-2011

    Love Lost! Both beautiful, and sad. It is better to have loved, than not to have loved at all.
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    duty

    01/03/2011

    Driving home at nights on a lonely street....Past homes with lights agleam....Trails of the day seem to melt away....It still seems like a dream....

    BrokenHeart2009 commented on *** IT'S NOW YOUR TURN***

    12-30-2010

    I read this poem and know their are two sides. One never knows how it feels to walk in ones shoes until they walked a mile. You reap what you sow, and it sounds like it was this person's time to do the reaping.
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    duty

    12/31/2010

    Love is not a "one way street".....Playing cards all night, I fear.... Coming home drunk at 5am .....Asking for another beer.

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on *** IT'S NOW YOUR TURN***

    12-29-2010

    I feel the release of emotion here and I really love the honesty. When tables are reversed it doesn't feel so good, so move on like we both know you should. Great write..............E
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    duty

    12/29/2010

    The song of life was a dullish thing......In her basic melody....A cradle-to-grave, monotonous swing....Often played in her minor key...To each their own -a hideway....That has no counterpart....The treasure-house of the soul that lies.....Somewhere close to the heart.

    optimistic commented on *** IT'S NOW YOUR TURN***

    12-28-2010

    This was a rough spot for the person being mention but, a great write over all maybe in due time you guys can become friend and communicate again. however, this poem was excellent great direction in mind and the attitude and emotion felt in this was great.
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    duty

    12/28/2010

    When tribulation comes our way....As in this world it will....I'll remember it's just a vally trod...Before we top the hill....

    duty commented on *** IT'S NOW YOUR TURN***

    12-28-2010

    E non e stata colpa mia. A piu tardi! Ciao!
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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