It's Over


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Just random crap. I tried a new thing where it was beauty mixed with dark emotions every other line!

It's Over

Lay your head down upon the sheets
My knife sharp, laddled in the sheath
Dream a dream of beauty, and close your pretty eyes
Turn away my face from all the lies

A smile upon your face as you enter another world
As my knife penetrates your flesh your toes become curled
Such beauty and grace lie upon your face
The memories of your life will soon be erased

Your voice so soft and so sweet
Yet these chains are wrapped around your feet
So beautiful, with the pain that you endure
Is this your demise, you're never sure

Kisses from you made my heart melt
To bad the emotions are never felt
You want to walk away and leave me a stray
This neuce will have no fray

So to you my darling I bid you good day
You will never have to hear the words I must say
Rest in peace and thanks for trying
After all it, it is I who is dying!

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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

cowboyup1824’s Poems (38)

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Body Image 2 Canvas 0
Body Image 1 0
The nothingness that surrounds us 0
It's Over 0
No Title 0
I couldn't sleep! 1
My Name Poem 2
To My Son 1
Giving Up 4
The coming storm 1
Time 5
My Own Personal Prison 15
Pen 3
Looking Down (free verse) 5
Do Not Pray For Me 3
Today I Heard The News 3
To My Father 2
I Love You My Sweet Robert Ray 3
Cut This Away 0
Cutting 35
Randomness 0
To Dream A Dream 1
Go Big or Go Home 0
Starting Over 2
My Sister, My friend 2
Two Souls Becoming One 2
Questions 0
Now & Then 0
Wood Duck 0
This Is Life 0
America Soldier! 1
Duck Hunting 1
Wandering Soul 0
The Blowing Wind 0
Guardian Angel 0
The Fire Deep Inside 1
Final Battle? 5
Fallen Angel 0