It's Valentines Day

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    Happy Valentines Day My Darling

    It's Valentines Day

    It's Valentine's Day my darling
    It isn't the roses that you brought
    Not even the diamond ring
    You gave
    I love to eat the chocolates
    In the fancy heart shaped box
    Not even the chocolates is what I want

    What I want no one can give
    But only you my darling

    I want to walk  hold your hand
    To hear your voice only
    To hear the sweet things you say
    Only makes me love you more


    Lay with me stroke my brow
    Sing to me a love song
    I'll fall to sleep in your arms
    We'll snuggle you and I

    When we awake
    A new day waits
    To share our love
    once more

    It is you daring that I want
    No one else can take your place




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    RHPeat commented on It's Valentines Day

    02-09-2010

    A love song from the lover to the lover. Why this is lovely. So smooth I thought I was on skis. A poet friend// RH Peat

    Bettysrainbow48

    02/09/2010

    Thank you comming from your training and experience that is a real complement

    Springsize commented on It's Valentines Day

    02-09-2010

    your poem is beautiful and brought valentine feelings to my door...

    Bettysrainbow48

    02/09/2010

    Oh thank you so much

    NevillePark commented on It's Valentines Day

    02-08-2010

    It's what a poet is Betty. A romantic! Happy to see that love keeps on truckin even if the bumper car of youth hits us as it passes us on the road of life. YOU ... sound like you've recaptured it here!

    Bettysrainbow48

    02/08/2010

    How cool thank you. Dang those bummer cars! I am a romantic. I love to write love poems

    Lolee commented on It's Valentines Day

    02-08-2010

    Nicely done! Love is a wonderful thing......................Ten!

    Bettysrainbow48

    02/08/2010

    Oh thank you, love really is a wonderful thing.

    dahlusion commented on It's Valentines Day

    02-08-2010

    sweetly composed and poetically delivered.........................bravo!

    Bettysrainbow48

    02/08/2010

    Thank you It means a lot to hear it.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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