I've Met Someone 07-20-2001

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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My poem to me. I was trying to force myself to be more confident. Lol. I'm not sure it worked.

I've Met Someone 07-20-2001

I've met someone.
You've met her too.
You've talked to her once.
She really trusts you.
She was afraid at first,
Afraid of what you might say.
She had been hiding for so long.
You could say she's been tucked away.
If your wondering who I'm talking about,
I guess I'll tell you her name.
I'm the one who has been hiding.
But I'm no longer afraid.

 

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bg26 commented on I've Met Someone 07-20-2001

08-21-2009

I give this two thumbs up you did your thang with this poem very well done.

lucky62 commented on I've Met Someone 07-20-2001

08-21-2009

Very nice to meet you, this is a powerful poem of looking and finding yourself through all the helpless wonderment of coming of age........... loved it

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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