Jack's Friend's Pickles
Jack Mother
Ate A Pickle
With His Friend
Who Had A Cane
That Helped Him Walk
To The Store
To Buy The Pickle
So His Mouth Would Smile
And Everyone Would Like Him
All While Jack Ate A Paczki
Jack's Friend's Pickles
9 Comments
Tags: Food
Poem Commentary
Wherefore art thou Jack Mother.
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Poem Comments
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cousinsoren commented on Jack's Friend's Pickles
01-07-2010
- "sizzling creations" it ought to be. :"wide range of things"
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cousinsoren commented on Jack's Friend's Pickles
01-04-2010
- Typos are a bother,especially when trying to type without my reading gasses. "wide range of themes" it ought tobe,and of course,"sizzling creatons."
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cousinsoren commented on Jack's Friend's Pickles
01-04-2010
- Hey ,Papa, I gonna send you da dang-d docta bill for crackin' mi ribs!! On a more serious note, whenever you get the pazski syndrome off your chest, you will be sparkling in different directions. We shall sit up all night reading your sizzling creaations on a side range of themes. It's about time you liberate yourself from the kitchen???? My rating for this delightful and slightly titillating piece is 8.
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blackfootlady commented on Jack's Friend's Pickles
12-11-2009
- I'm not certain that pickle digested well pap...Ty lol
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12/11/2009
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Hampton commented on Jack's Friend's Pickles
11-26-2009
- It must be something you ate........................
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11/27/2009
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