JAIL

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JAIL

IN JAIL WE ARE ALL THAT WE CAN BE,
WHILE OUR FAMILY STUCK OUT WITH NO SYMPATHY.
THIS PLACE IS FULL OF SIN,
A PLACE WHERE MY FREEDOM IS THE PEN.
THIS PLACE IS A WORLD OF ITS OWN,
GOING HOME IS ONE UNKNOWN.
WITH NO WHERE TO GO NO ONE TO SEE,
IS THIS WHAT GOD HAS PLANNED FOR ME?
SOME PEOPLE LIE, SOME PEOPLE TRY,
SOME DONT CARE AND CANT WAIT TO GET HIGH.
I SAY THIS PLACE ISNT FOR ME,
BUTS ITS THE ONLY PLACE I SEEM TO BE.

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WinterFrost commented on JAIL

06-18-2009

Other than I'd have written this place is full of sinful men so it fits better with pen on the next line Its fine. Do you believe it's gods plan or our own free wills that lead us to such? Good work

purplekisses commented on JAIL

06-18-2009

umm.. so so true... u are very good at what u write.. keep writing

sk8ergirl commented on JAIL

06-18-2009

that was great we can really feel the emotion and it shows reality as well i look forward to reading your other work

DragonAngel commented on JAIL

06-02-2009

this rocks bud i know all about this place lol I think they need to be more humane about it........

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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