Jakob

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Jakob

His name is Jake
And a great friend he does make
His name is Jake
And my whole heart he doth take

A new style
Just for a while
A new smile
Will make up the miles

He's going away soon
Not as far as the moon
Just down the road
To a new college abode

I'll miss him quite dearly
Because always I want him near me
I'll miss him quite dearly
In love with him I will be

Childhood friends, all those memories
Wishing upon stars, cheerful glee
Now we kiss beneath those stars
Who would have thought, on earth or mars

We learned to love
With help from above
Ready set go!
We'll run to and fro

Laughs and smiles
Can make up the miles
Apart we will be
But never truly from me

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BikemanRJ commented on Jakob

08-30-2010

This has a beautiful word flow great rythem and rhyme. But most of all what a beautiful picture you have painted of friendship and love. I hope the laughs and smiles will forever make up the miles till your pathes join again one day. Great poem God Bless Randy

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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