Jealous

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    written for a friend that got over something stupid.

    Jealous

    Jealous...that is what you are, you're jealous of
    Everybody around you which makes your
    Senses cloud with rage even though your
    Smiling on the outside.
    Is it fun? Is it fun to be jealous?
    Cause from what I can tell you seem to enjoy making yourself
    Angry and Jealous.

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    nonners commented on Jealous

    12-14-2009

    i can relate-jealousy is toxic.and it gets the better of us sometimes

    frazel5 commented on Jealous

    10-28-2009

    Another job well done. Feel the anger in this one.

    1990lh commented on Jealous

    10-27-2009

    yeah i so understand were you are comng from yeah jealous is very dagerous becareful.

    kmooney commented on Jealous

    10-27-2009

    Okay, so someone is jealous. I like the premise of your piece. Sounds a bit angry. I hope you're okay. Jealousy is a very dangerous emotion. Life is too short for it if you ask me. I like to enjoy life and try not to get caught up in all the drama. I do remember being young though. I suppose its something that mos folks grow out of. Nice write. Thanks for sharing... K

    sk8ergirl commented on Jealous

    10-27-2009

    great poem short but powerful.....man i sound old hahahha....great poem

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