Jeannine is fourty, Im eighteen

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    Jeannine is fourty, Im eighteen

    The day was normal, their all the same
    the "hott" girls were all mean
    until I saw a gorgeous girl
    she's small, she's sweet, Jeannine

    I'd never met a kinder heart
    of hearts she is the queen
    the story of my broken heart:
    Jeannine is fourty, I', eighteen

    I love the way she smile's up
    I love the air between
    I'd kiss her like a child but
    Jeannine is fourty I'm eighteen

    She asked me if I had a car
    I said "no I have a bike"
    but I'd love it if I walked you home
    and kissed you in the night

    instead I walked her to her car
    and I started to lean
    she closed the door and pulled away
    Jeannine is fourty, I'm eighteen

    but one day we will fall in love
    that simply is a dream
    hope don't even reach her voice
    Jeannine is fourty, I'm eighteen

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    stiches commented on Jeannine is fourty, Im eighteen

    06-29-2009

    dude ive been there. im 20 and i have had a 38 year old women and for a long time thats how it was. i realy liked the poem im not the romantic type but i did like this one good work

    duchess commented on Jeannine is fourty, Im eighteen

    04-14-2009

    Patman; I am married to a man who courted me for 7 years. He was 18 and I was 39. We have been married for 13 years now.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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