I wished you could have been here to see
the comming of the fall and winter
To see the beautiful colors of the autumn leaves,
to have watched them
as the wind blows them off the trees,
Leaving the trees bare,
Then winter comes-
I wished that you were here.

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Redrose77 commented on Johnathon


I have suffered loss of a loved one. Your words really spoke to me. I can relate. Thanks for sharing.

MorganaLafey commented on Johnathon


Wonderful sentiment to a distant loved one. Again to say soo very much in so few words isn't an easy accomplishment, but you have once again done just that. Wonderful. I enjoyed this piece very much and again thanks for posting and sharing with us here at OP. Keep it up

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Zenwitchfaery’s Poems (12)

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Magick Returns Or Mabon 1
Missing The Moon 3
Keep Your Darkness 13
Broken 3
Samhian 2
Sedona Morning 4
A Prayer To The World 2
The Poem 5
Autumn Love 3
The Doubt Monster 7
Planting Belladonna In The Moonlight 3
Johnathon 2