Journey in the Full Moon

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Journey in the Full Moon

Moonlight bathed bodies

Snowflakes drifting down

Steam rising up as I float

 

We are alone in paradise

 

The moon kisses my nakedness

And you smile down at me

Your hands resting under my back

 

We are together in zion

 

Has there ever been a more perfect moment?

A more romantic unison?

A more special love?

 

We are the honey of our lives

 

Your eyes are Clearwater

Your spirit is home

You are the only one I have ever shared this with

 

Why?

 

Then oh why?

Did I let you go?

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SavVySam commented on Journey in the Full Moon

08-22-2010

A dreamy and sensual poem of shared moments that end in question...tender with longing...nicely done!

shywoodrose

08/22/2010

gratzi! glad to have your feedback :)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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