JUDGE THEM NOT.

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    OUR FIRST PARENTS, BY THE ORIGINAL SIN HAVE CONTAMINATED EVERY MAN BORN OF A WOMAN WITH SIN, BASED ON THE BIBLICAL TEN COMMANDMENTS, MY WORK REMINDS MAN THAT HE IS TOO SINFUL TO JUDGE HIS FELLOW SINFUL MAN. IF HE DOES, HE RISKS BEING JUDGED AND CONDEMNED BY THE ALMIGHTY GOD- OF- ALL- SUPREMACY.

    JUDGE THEM NOT.

    You think,
    It was they who were serving other gods before the Lord,
                                                                                 Judge them not.
    It was they who were using the name of the Lord in vain,
                                                                                 Judge them not.
    It was they who were not keeping the Sabbath day  holy,
                                                                                 Judge them not.
    It was they who were not honoring  their    fathers    and
                                                                      mothers,
                                                                                 Judge them not.
    It        was      they        who             were         killing,
                                                                                 Judge them not.



    You even believe,
    It         was    they      who      were commiting adultery,
                                                                                 Judge them not.
    It         was       they       who            were      stealing,
                                                                                 Judge them not.
    It was they who were  bearing  false   witnesses  against
                                                       their       neighbors,
                                                                                 Judge them not.
    It was they who  were  coveting  their  neighbors'  wives,
                                                                                 Judge them not.
    It was they who were  coveting  their  neighbors'  goods,
                                                                                 Judge them not.
    Do you know the story of the serpent,Eve,the apple  and
                                                                        Adam?
                                                                         Then, judge  no more;
    lest the "Judicious-Judge"judges you for judging  unjustly!


                                                                                  

                                                                                 
                                                         
                                                                                                          




                                                            

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on JUDGE THEM NOT.

    08-08-2010

    this was some wonderful, powerful words of inspiration we should all remind our-self's of each and everyday....thanks for reminding us who we are and who is the father of us all......great read dear.....loved it.....loves ya asha

    GUSTY

    08/08/2010

    THANK YOU DEAR ApaqRasgirl FOR YOUR AGREEMENT ON THE FACT THAT ONLY GOD IS THE OVER-ALL JUDGE!!!

    tierra7 commented on JUDGE THEM NOT.

    08-08-2010

    Very powerful piece-" JUDGE THEM NOT." thank you for sharin'.... Namaste,Tierra@}-'-,

    GUSTY

    08/08/2010

    THANKS, DEAR TIERRA FOR SIDING WITH ME THAT "WE SHOULDN'T JUDGE UNJUSTLY"...

    dahlusion commented on JUDGE THEM NOT.

    04-12-2010

    This powerful poem based on the Biblical Ten Commandments will certainly appeal to those who believe in a Supreme God and in the "rules dictated" by those men, the authors of the Bible. Poetically, this is a solid piece of creative writing executing perfect meter, flow, and diction. Thought I can not relate to the overt religious message nor to a Supreme God, creatively it is masterful. Bravo!

    GUSTY

    06/12/2010

    IF IT'S NOT TOO LATE, LET ME SAY 'THANK-YOU' FOR HAVING APPRECIATED MY FIRST POEM: "JUDGE THEM NOT" I WAS TOO 'FRESH' TO KNOW EVERYTHING BY THEN!

    AFIRIQUE commented on JUDGE THEM NOT.

    04-12-2010

    "lest the "Judicious-Judge"judges you for judging unjustly! " The sound effect and choice of words are simply awsome. I call it the "J" line. "Judge them not" is sobering. It will touch every soul with a heart.. Great first posting. Af.

    GUSTY

    06/12/2010

    THANKS FOR HAVING APPRECIATED MY FIRST WORK: JUDGE-THEM-NOT. I WAS TOO 'FRESH' TO KNOW CERTAIN FACTS!!!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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