JUDGMENT

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God knows it All

JUDGMENT

"JUDGMENT"

No one knows this word
because it belongs to me
Forgotten and Unheard by
Others, I yearned to set you free

Passed on and on to people
as if this word meant nothing
But the one and only truth; to some
it does mean something

Stripped of all emotion, I
feel naked and so cold
Freezing from the inside out,
by the things that I've
been told

No man is meant to judge,
nor should women or
their children
They curse this life from God
so some wish it was not
given

So now the truth has spilt
just like the bloody cross
Jesus in the Wood
His blood paid all the cost

See the pain it's caused,
the twist of fate it
sends
Judgement took His Child
hostage
 until his Life would end

Now no more than a
distant memory, this
victim of Judgement
dies

All the blood has emptied,
there my body lies

By: Michael Dean (Waldrop)-Vienneau (BB)
Written:It doesn't say but over 3 1/2 years ago

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dahlusion commented on JUDGMENT

02-06-2013

The deep honesty in this poetic piece is pure creation—bravo!

jademelissa74 commented on JUDGMENT

02-05-2013

Passionate write. At face value, this piece is filled with sadness, anger and discernment. I appreciate the passion in which you manage to convey a lesson we must learn..."No man is meant to judge"..Impressive.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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