Addict

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    Addict

    Each woman
    A vindictive, addictive, restrictive drug


    Each woman I love
    A seductive sinful syringe


    Each woman I love
    Left a mark every time I’d cringe


    Each women I love
    A defenseless deer trapped by the pack


    Each women I love
    The hunter ensnared in his own trap

     

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    sevyn7 commented on Addict

    01-30-2011

    Yes woman know the game much better than men, and though we think we are the ones in control, they are the ones who pull at our strings, and seduce the hunter, and before we know it we are deer in their trap. NIce short to the point peom.
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    weirdlittlekc commented on Addict

    01-08-2011

    Lovely. It truely captures your love/hate relationship with women. A drug that you know will hurt, but you can't resist.
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    nightscrawling

    01/30/2011

    thank you :)

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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