Just a lady

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Just a lady

                            In the visage of others,you may be just a fragile lady
                            In the impression of many,you may be a docile one
                            In the first time by your cocoon,you may unknown one
                          In the outer dressing,you may be consider as lesser one
                           
                            In the mist of all conceptions,you're known to yourself
                            In every successful one there you are with efforts
               In the brain of renowned one,your planning of long time's existed
      In the movement of despair and dismay,your guidance is radian ted

           Though you may consider as a lady with sympathy and duties
           Environment of peace and smoothness in life can't be obtained
           Ugly wars're detained due to skillful mind of ladies
           Friends and foe's treated well in the home of a lady
              
                           You're not a just a lady anymore
                           Give respect and love to a lady
                           There shouldn't be lust in the appearance of lady
                           After God, a lady's there to protect the world.



          

      
             
            

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danmartyjake1 commented on Just a lady

02-12-2011

I enjoyed reading this, even with a few typos and the meaning was not lost in the mispelling of a word, I liked the last line so much.

jyothi

02/13/2011

TY for liking it.

Rhymer commented on Just a lady

02-09-2011

A lady, a mother, mother earth, who do men run to when hurt, needing comfort. Excellent write. 10

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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