Just A Point…

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    Just A Point…

    Just A Point…

     

     Just a point , in a line,

    just an instant, stuck in time,

    wandering, wondering evermore,

    then washed upon some foreign shore.

    Come to root, and grow to learn

    Discontent and disconcerne

     

      Time moves us.

     

    Now we drift away from strife,,

    protein coated viral life.

    To find another willing cell,

    to do the thing we do most well

    .

      Time moves us

     

    What remnant strain takes hold this day?

    What influence shall shape our way?

    As in the past it comes again,

    although we can’t remember when..

     

       Time moves us.

     

    Ejected, blown, into space,

    solar wind and human race.

    All time passed and none to tell,

    we land upon another cell.

     

        Time moves us.

     

    From cell to cell we make our way,

    Infectious strands of DNA

    Do we really have a choice?

    Listen to your inner voice.

     

        Time moves on..

     

     

     

    D,Scolnik.

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    WordSlinger commented on Just A Point…

    01-19-2010

    You crack me up, lol, you are so amazing, lmao, ty WS

    captaininsight

    01/29/2010

    Dear WS, You are far too kind and for that I thank You. I have been remiss in not returning your kind attention. I will make a point of visiting your work , hopefully tonight, sicereley; Thanks.

    SavVySam commented on Just A Point…

    01-15-2010

    Hello~This poem is insightful, enlightening, and at times a bit frightening. Your keen perspective is as always sharp as a tack! Great concept!

    captaininsight

    01/16/2010

    I've been so pre-occupied. Thank You SavVySam for taking the time to read me.It's always so good to get your input. Did you read Parking Lot Kisses yet? A little romantic for me but I think it works. I must take time and read you back..

    SavVySam

    01/16/2010

    I sure did, in fact it is my favorite so far that you've penned!

    cmlestrade commented on Just A Point…

    01-05-2010

    This was great. The rhyming and meter were excellent. the flow was smooth and the theme was consistent. A very nice read.

    captaininsight

    01/29/2010

    Ms Cmlsrade, How wonderful it is that Mother Nature is there for us to learn from. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Thank You, as ever.

    blackfootlady commented on Just A Point…

    12-06-2009

    Point well takened ,ty for the write.well done.Neat pic to go with that poem.

    captaininsight

    12/08/2009

    Thank You blackfootlady, I look forward to reading you.

    Stryx commented on Just A Point…

    12-05-2009

    A good write - with an interesting point of view.

    captaininsight

    12/05/2009

    Thank you, It seems to me mankind imitates nature im all respects as a child immitates to learn.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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