Underappreciated provision

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    Just a quick poem that was posted on the original poetry facebook contest that challenged to make a poem out of the first line "The sparkle of the clear water glistens"

    Underappreciated provision

    The sparkle of the clear water glistens
    Capturing the beauty only nature holds
    The liquid contains stories though few seldom listen
    Pollution permeates throughout this shimmering gold
    The dewdrops fall from the leaves into the abyss
    Tainted themselves from the trash left amiss
    Treasure this provision for it will soon be gone
    Man is to selfish to right what we have wronged


    written: 8-27-2010

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    smoothdame commented on Underappreciated provision

    12-01-2010

    nice and deep with a dose of honesty i like this poem great job and write on.

    Nassira commented on Underappreciated provision

    10-17-2010

    That is very deep reflection on the state in which we all are as human beings and the forthcoming catastrophy we are heading to... I had to read your work twice to try and grasp the meaning of your message... very well expressed and oh too well true! Thank you for sharing :)

    TwistedAce

    10/21/2010

    Thank you, it is really sad how we continually take advantage of our most prized resource..... sad

    Skite commented on Underappreciated provision

    08-30-2010

    T, for been away so long this a great come back, luv your deepness & gud luck in all your goals....:)

    TwistedAce

    10/21/2010

    Thanks skite you've always been on of my biggest fans you rock :)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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