Just Another Player

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    Just Another Player

    He was just another player playing the game, Making me fall for him so he could drive me insane.
    He made all the promises that I  said I would never again believe. Just as I gave my heart and soul, he said it's time for him to leave.
    Now here I sit once again a loser of the game.
    Like a spider he pulled me in his web, Just another player messing with my head.

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    Jodes commented on Just Another Player

    02-19-2010

    Lol. I know that's not funny, but I laugh at it. Your poems are deep, and true, so just keep the good work. Make them longer next time.

    GucciGurl

    02/22/2010

    Im such a free style writter that I write what I fell. Sometimes it's so fast I just got to get it down for ppl to read. Im about to bust out a whole new load of stuff. Keep your eyes on me.

    KingGeorgeII commented on Just Another Player

    01-19-2010

    Good poem but need a little work! "Just Another Player" He was just another player playing the game Making making me fall for him to drive me insane *When you write, try not to write a paragraph. That way your readers will be able to make your poem sing when they read and interpet it......Just a suggestion. You have a very good message. I can work with you and help, only if you like!

    GucciGurl

    01/20/2010

    Sometimes when I write it just comes out so fast that I forget to breath. Thank you for your comments. Yes you help will be great. I am just a free style writter but suggestions are always welcome

    kpeery09 commented on Just Another Player

    01-18-2010

    Very Nice write, I can sense the emotion coming from it and sorry to hear that you were played like that. For the rating I give you 10

    Chaos128 commented on Just Another Player

    12-15-2009

    ha ha Like I said...sounds like some one I know. It's very good work done from a personal perspective, the heavy font makes it a little oppressive, though. Big thumbs up!

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