Just for fun, cats and dogs.....lol

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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Just for fun, cats and dogs.....lol

This post is an exercise in practicing rhymes two lines and counting syllables......so you may see it change...a lot......lol.......sorry for the mess.
This was tougher then I thought it would be, plus I just could not get the imagination switch in my brain to click on......lol.....so expect more to come from this little exercise....lol
have fun with it
loves ya asha

Follow the picture numbers for each poem.....lol.......good luck......grins

#1 poem, two images rhyming one line per image. not so easy….lol


#1 poem; image 1-2: We can sleep in branches of a tree 
                                      Between two chairs looks kinda neat 

#1 poem; image 3-4: So do you think this is a weed 
                                       We can even sleep on a jeep 

#1 poem; image 5-6: I swear I didn’t eat those cracker jacks
                                      Your always trying to cover your tracks 

#1 poem; image 7-8: Hey Charlie!, does this make my butt look fat 
                                      Well at least I don’t make the tires go flat 

#1 poem; images 9-10: Hey! it’s not being selfish, why waste the space
                                          If my buddy wakes up, they wont find a trace 

#1 poem; images 11-12: Meow, ebony and ivory blends so well 
                                             Wonder what he will think when I begin to yell 

#1 poem; images 13-14: I love you he says, when he plays blue moon 
                                             Guardian of the bloom, that shoots up in June

#1 poem; images 15-16: Lots of room here, better then that stinky shoe 
                                             Can you see me, I can’t see you, peek a boo 

#1 poem; images 17-18: ahh! finally, a cozy place to rest with music is best 
                                             I swear I thought it was baby powder, sorry bout the mess

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#2 poem, rhyming two lines per image. a bit easier, I think…lol


#2 poem: image 1: You can sleep with me 
                                   If you can climb a tree 

#2 poem: image 2: Cats can look so neat 
                                   No matter where they sleep 

#2 poem; image 7: Dogs can’t sleep like this they don’t have any balance 
                                   Thats because wet paint is such an annoyance 

#2 poem: image 3: You know I love you right 
                                   I love you too sleep tight  

#2 poem: image 4: Now I know he can’t possible miss me here 
                                  I’ll get my hugs before he hits a gear 

#2 poem; image 5: I’m not scared, not scared, I swear
                                  Sometimes life just hard to bare

#2 poem; image 6: I like this bowl, when it’s not filled with silly Jello 
                                   Brother likes the other bowl just because its yellow 

#2 poem; image 7: Dogs can’t sleep like this they don’t have any balance 
                                   Thats because wet paint is such an annoyance 

#2 poem; image 8: A perfect curve for my perfect curves 
                                   But to sleep like this takes lots of nerves 

#2 poem; image 9: Not my most glamorous position 
                                   But its my best dogie rendition 

#2 poem; image 10: Buddy is my best friend 
                                     Black and gray always blend 

#2 Poem; image 11: I love to play the ivory so well 
                                     Black ones will put you under my spell 

#2 poem; image 12: The view from up here is oh so grand
                                      If I fall from here on my feet I’ll land 

#2 poem; image 13: Sweet dreams of melody strumming soft chords 
                                      It’s long necks like waves crashing through fjords 

#2 poem; image 14: Funny, I didn’t know catnip had a bloom 
                                     Well at least it smell like sweet perfume 

#2 poem; image 15: Mommies suitcase is a great place to nap 
                                     I chase the zipper when she closes the flap 

#2 poem; image 16: His slipper is always really snuggly, warm & cozy 
                                     The life of a kitten is always really rosy 

#2 poem; image 17: This music is always so relaxing 
                                      Napping here is always so addicting 

#2 poem; image 18: This always makes my fur so soft and fluffy 
                                     It’s just some flower, no need to get huffy 

#2 poem; image 19: Damn its just too hot today 
                                     Waste not, want not, I say 

playing with rhymes and syllables using these cute pics……..

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ginga commented on Just for fun, cats and dogs.....lol

08-09-2010

Asha, You certainly are in training to get the creative ehymes flowing. Nice pics too. ginga

ApaqRasgirl

08/10/2010

thank you glad you enjoyed it..........loves ya asha

MootPoint commented on Just for fun, cats and dogs.....lol

08-09-2010

Nice and whimsical. I like how they match the pictures :)

ApaqRasgirl

08/09/2010

thank you dear, I am still working on that one,,,so there may be some changes......lol.....it is far from being what I wanted to make it.....oh and please have a read of my new post with no title.......its what I have been working on for several days, you will find something there for you...........lol........thanks love, loves ya asha

stever commented on Just for fun, cats and dogs.....lol

08-08-2010

love this syle if you read more of my crap you'll see that pretty much all i do red[ killdo][ no way to win ]..or all of them lol[ they all short]....StEvEr

ApaqRasgirl

08/08/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment, I would be honored to check out your writes and no, they are not crap......lol....thanks loves ya asha

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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