Just Gray steel Walls

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    I wrote this after watching a show on tv about womans prisons .Very scary

    Just Gray steel Walls

    The door slams shut what a hollow sound
    A clink on the lock as the key turns round
    No light from any window do I see
    Just gray steel walls surrounding me
    A plain hard bed close to the floor
    Is this my home for ever more

    I had my fun took what wasn't mine
    Caught by the law now doing time
    No more family do I see
    They have given up on me
    They tyred so hard to show me the way
    But I thought I was smart and went astray

    Now I am here in prison today
    Sorry for all that I have done
    But know one believes me no not one
    No friendly face no words of love
    I look up in the darkness and cry to God above
    But no mercy comes for me I broke the law and this is how its meant to be

    Threats and cussing spiting on me
    Pushing and shoving they wont let me be
    Everything I do they can see they are watching over me
    How I long to be free but I guess its not meant to be
    So from my story please learn well
    Our you will follow me to hell

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