Just him

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    Just him

    here i am again wanting to write my thoughts
    no way to express them even though i ought
    the words dont come
    but a person always comes to mind
    just him
    floating in my thoughts
    our love
    his touch
    my words
    how do they compare with what we're worth
    do the two of us make the right match
    do we have everything it takes
    it feels like a big nothing
    everything seems so fake
    but then why do i cry when he's angry
    and why do i follow when he walks away
    why do i care so much
    why does my heart break
    our love
    his eyes
    my trust
    how do they compare with what we're worth
    there is no magic, no sparkle of belief
    because everyone hates that he is with me
    it wont be the same
    but what is "the same"
    was there ever a moment when everything was right
    he may not have loved me the way i wanted him to
    but that doesnt mean he didnt love me with all he had
    why do i cry when he's angry
    and why do i follow when he walks away
    why do i care so much
    why does my heart break
    our love
    his touch
    my words
    our love
    his eyes
    my trust
    I love him

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    Bluestarboi commented on Just him

    05-19-2009

    sounds like alot of hurt and confusion is behind this, its well written but, i think if this is an actual problem you need to sit and talk with him. Sounds like you really love him....

    Bluestarboi commented on Just him

    05-19-2009

    sounds like alot of hurt and confusion is behind this, its well written but, i think if this is an actual problem you need to sit and talk with him. Sounds like you really love him....

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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