Just Me And The Sea

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  • Sadness

    Just Me And The Sea
    If I had the chance
    I'd run away...
    far into the sea.

    No ups, or downs,
    no hills to climb...
    just me, and only me!

    No one to hurt,
    no one to love...
    not even someone to hate.

    Just me alone,
    me and the sea...
    I think "that" life would be great!

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    kaddeesh commented on Just Me And The Sea

    09-17-2009

    I guess we all feel that way sometimes. Thanks for sharing!
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    litilraven

    09/18/2009

    That's for sure, and you're welcome

    alaskawriter96 commented on Just Me And The Sea

    04-25-2009

    I understand your message, this poem itself seems to carry that wave of calming oblivion with it as you read.....was that intended?
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    litilraven

    09/18/2009

    Not really intended, but if it does that, I'm glad. I was just tired of all the drama at the time, tired of emotions and wished I could find a please that was emotionless, lol.

    kenparme commented on Just Me And The Sea

    12-02-2008

    Good poem-brings your point across in a touching way.
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    litilraven

    09/18/2009

    thank-you

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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