Just Peaceful Sleep; growl!!!,darn cat, meowww!!!stupid dog

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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Just Peaceful Sleep; growl!!!,darn cat, meowww!!!stupid dog

Oh the joy of peaceful sleep
Nap-time we cats love the peace  
Oh this is my fav-rite dream 
What better dream then chasing that mouse
I'll catch you mouse, round, round my house
Maybe I'll give you a good douse

Hey no dogs allowed to this party
Just go sleep in your corner Artie
Don't need you in my dreams, o`smartie
You always make to much noise when you sleep
Just don't be waking us with every sneeze 
Come here little mouse, heres a piece of cheese

Snore, growl, snore, growl, snore, growl, snore, growl 
Hey, dog, stop chasing guinea fowl
Wipe that drool, heres a towel
Sleep, sleep, meowww,  dreamy, so loves this hat
Scratch, snatch got you rat, trapped like a bat
Growlsss, shut up darn cat, why don't you scat

Written by
asha
2010

just practicing with rhyming & syllables

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stever commented on Just Peaceful Sleep; growl!!!,darn cat, meowww!!!stupid dog

08-07-2010

very cool i now live with 2 cats my womans never lived with cats in my life ,,but there they sleepin al the time ...StEvEr

ApaqRasgirl

08/07/2010

lol...glad you enjoyed my little practice piece....thanks for commenting love asha

BadBadBear commented on Just Peaceful Sleep; growl!!!,darn cat, meowww!!!stupid dog

08-07-2010

This is definitely some great practice rhyming and syllables with the cat and dog. Enjoyed the write! BBear

ApaqRasgirl

08/07/2010

thank you friend, I am glad you enjoyed it........just trying to learn here.....lol.....thanks, loves ya asha

cheronld commented on Just Peaceful Sleep; growl!!!,darn cat, meowww!!!stupid dog

08-07-2010

I don't know whats cuter...the poem...or the cat images....lol....either way I have had an enjoyable ride....nicely done my friend...I love it when a write inspires smiles and laughter...Cher

ApaqRasgirl

08/07/2010

thank you dear I am glad you liked it........just a practice thing.....lol loves ya asha

BikemanRJ commented on Just Peaceful Sleep; growl!!!,darn cat, meowww!!!stupid dog

08-06-2010

This is really a cute poem Asha we have always had cats in the house and many years ago we had an inside dog as well. They play well together but cats do enjoy their sleep time. Great rhyme and word flow. GOD BLESS. Randy

ApaqRasgirl

08/07/2010

thank you dear, I am glad you enjoyed it, this was a practice of rhyming and counting syllables...........thanks for reading. blessings to ya love asha

ginga commented on Just Peaceful Sleep; growl!!!,darn cat, meowww!!!stupid dog

08-06-2010

Asha, A great practice exercise in rhyming. Light hearted and whimsical too. ginga

ApaqRasgirl

08/06/2010

thank you dear, I am working hard on it.....working on rhymes and syllable counting,,,,,,I am practicing with another one using those pictures, writing a couple lines for each picture and having them rhyme. its a little tougher than I thought it would be.....anyway glad you enjoyed it......thanks dear for reading and supporting....... loves ya asha

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