JUST STOP

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    • SweetBlood
    • Wasn't it beautiful running wild 'till you fell asleep? 'Till the monsters caught up to you

    JUST STOP

     Please stop fighting its tearinng me apart.The blood will spill along with my heart.Their yelling and screaming.Just make a mess.Its not helpen no one.It just kills us instead.I can't take their fighting,the tears are cold.My head is spinning,My heart is cold.My eyes are crying.The blood is shed my heart has stoped finally I'm dead.

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    hdmac commented on JUST STOP

    09-12-2009

    The poem is intense, but all their fighting should'nt kill you-it could make you stronger.
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    CasimirJash commented on JUST STOP

    09-01-2009

    love the rhyme, nice poem, wonderful, you are very talented
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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