Just Thinkin

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    Just Thinkin

    One day- I will walk away.
    This world too hard for me.
    Yet I will never forget
    those wanting to live-
    how I wish I felt that free.
    It’s all what happens-
    in one’s live-
    that really tells the tale-
    Now I know that I am tarnished-
    I live in my own jail.
    Too many faces, too many hands-
    since I have grown so old-
    there is nothing I don’t remember-
    My story too deep to be told.


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    JadedJezzabel commented on Just Thinkin

    11-20-2010

    WoW.......many of us feel this way........tarnished and caged.........like time spent growing was time wasted by getting too old to enjoy life.

    kdarcy commented on Just Thinkin

    05-24-2010

    You wrote this for me, words I could not seem to find, you said so beautifully, exactly the way I feel sometimes. I guess we'll keep tellin it, the journey has many paths, the ground is not always level, be well my friend, k

    mspoetris

    05/30/2010

    How did you know?

    dahlusion commented on Just Thinkin

    01-06-2010

    Oh, my, sad Molly, to perish is to evolve into another existence, maybe empty, or maybe full, of light, love, harmony, maybe full of darkness, hate, anger. We shall never know until we perish; and while you are here, O Luminous One, shine on!

    Rhymer commented on Just Thinkin

    12-22-2009

    A person never gets to old to tell there story. I feel this poem goes deeper than you care to reveal. 10 from me

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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