KARMA DEFINITION: GOD'S WRATH

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    KARMA DEFINITION: GOD'S WRATH

    KARMA 'S DEFINITION: PAY BACKS ARE A BITCH


    A drunk man speaks a sober mans thoughts
    with little common sense
    repressing feelings throughout life

    it hinders intelligence

    He patents his denial
    for big boys never cry
    The tear a sign of weakness
    he'd sooner choose to die

    Silence was his refuge
    better seen then heard
    His bruises always mended
    forever scarred by words

    His daily walk on egg shells
    created endless fear
    He felt the need to cry
    tho, never sheds a tear

    He started life with innocence
    soft hearted and naive
    His love was unconditional
    he trust what he's perceived

    Survival was his teacher
    his instincts well in tune
    each day this boy is hardened
    he meets defeat too soon

    His introduction to alcohol
    an answer to his prayers
    that day he found his way
    to release the years he's bear-ed

    He didn't cry  He whined
    He didn't talk  He screamed
    He never hid one day again
    He always made a scene

    He deserved his instant cure
    he lived his hell on earth
    he was dealt a life
    he feels was cursed from birth

    Little did he know
    his hell had just begun
    alcohol was now survival
    he lost what once was fun

    This drunk man speaks all his thoughts
    he feels makes perfect sense
    releasing repressed feelings
    that spoke pure ignorance

    The moral to this story
    is treat your child well
    he will repeat your patterns
    pay backs straight from hell

    BY: Terri Lynn Waldrop Vienneau 101  Written:5/01/2008
     Kaleidoscope's
    Ghetto 101

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    earthly commented on KARMA DEFINITION: GOD'S WRATH

    02-19-2010

    WOW-many I love dearly suffer daily to release the demon alcohol from their life-nice write...Earthly

    SecretPanda8491 commented on KARMA DEFINITION: GOD'S WRATH

    10-13-2009

    This poem is amazing Kaleidoscope. You write from a deep down pain and are able to express how you feel through the words you write. Well done.

    Kaleidoscope

    10/31/2009

    I have had a colorful life to say the least. So, dysfunction or pain and joy and all my feelings hit my paper with my fav pens. It has helped me greatly. See You in a couple weeks. Than You

    dancinghawk commented on KARMA DEFINITION: GOD'S WRATH

    10-06-2009

    love this ... sooooooo perceptive ... all starts in innocence ... is influenced ... is passed on ... came here through your post on poetography's page ... love his work ... glad to be introduced to yours, as well ... thx for posting!

    Kaleidoscope

    10/31/2009

    Thank You! You write well and I enjoy reading your poetry. Isn't it great when we can do what we love "WRITE" and also, help others see they are not alone. Great thing Thank YOu be back after this swine flu is gone. GOD BlESS

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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