keeps holding on.

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    keeps holding on.

    she doesn't want tomorrow to come, when she is happy were she stands, in the middle of confusion and happiness. she wants to see how the conversations progress, and doesn't want to see them end, but most of all, she doesn't want this fairy tale to end, even though it should..... for this why those brown eyes shed those wretched tears down her dreary face.......... She doesn't want to keep holding on because she knows that it will only get her hurt, but the words that he speaks keeps her holding on, unwilling to let go......
    even if the words become negative she will keep holding on, for it will take more than words to ease her grip.....

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    mrobb6488 commented on keeps holding on.

    04-27-2009

    This is something that I can relate to completely...not many people can reduce me to tears, but you very nearly did. Great read and an awesome job! M-Robb

    origionalmerlin commented on keeps holding on.

    04-27-2009

    good scene and tight prose keep writing, you will do well here

    dixiegirl1968 commented on keeps holding on.

    04-26-2009

    blue 92 i appsultly love this did you enter it in the contest if so good luch

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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