Kismet

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    Kismet

    Stars kept

    Planets linked

    Hearts met

    Eyelids winked 

    Flurries flew

    Instant magnet drew

    Hands clasp

    Hips rasp


    Icy drizzle

    Bows shivered

    Birds nestled

    Storms delivered


    Passion escapes

    Love quakes

    Angels look on

    Heaven shakes

     

    Winds Fizzle

    Trickles drip

    Dust settles

    In Peace slips

     

    -M. Jacobs

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    BringMeBullets commented on Kismet

    02-11-2010

    This goes beyond poetry. This is utter beauty. You surely have a talent. I enjoy your work. Great job.
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    danmartyjake1

    02/14/2010

    "Kismet" was really from a pure experience that was catalogued in my mind and I wanted to savor it.. Thanks for reading it!

    charles52 commented on Kismet

    01-18-2010

    danmartyjake1; The pace is beyond fast. I love great pace in a poem and you have certainly got it down. Good read. Charles
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    danmartyjake1

    01/19/2010

    Dear Charles, Thank You, It is and you may have noticed that I write this way, also check out "Hearth" and let me know your thoughts. I am glad you liked "Kismet".

    Niecy commented on Kismet

    01-18-2010

    'KISMET' ~ COSMIC RACING CLOUD 9 SUCH AN EMBRACE TO BEHOLD, I JUST WANNA LET IT... GALAXY UNFOLD! CREATIVE INK!!!
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    danmartyjake1

    02/16/2010

    Surely, the pace is a delicate part of how this poem stays intact, and the meaning from within it is cosmic and from the galaxy. Thanks for hearing it clearly as it was written to be heard in this way and for communicating that back to me, the writer or messenger, as it will.. Many thanks.

    Marsink commented on Kismet

    01-18-2010

    It is so efficient in space, context, and lines delivering emotional impact. An uppercut of poetic device!
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    danmartyjake1

    02/16/2010

    Your comments made me quiver with delight. I know you received the message of the poem intact. Many thanks.

    SavVySam commented on Kismet

    01-18-2010

    This piece is a tightly cast work with phrases of the exquisite happenings in passions dance! ~Sizzle~~
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    danmartyjake1

    01/18/2010

    So Glad it sizzled for you. Thanks

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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