Knowing..

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    Knowing..
    Alone, scared, confused with all the crying

    Contemplating, hesitating, resisting all this time

    Wondering what you look like, do you have your mothers smile, or your fathers eyes

    Hoping that will we just collide

    Longing, waiting, wanting to stop the pain

    Just needing to hold you to my heart

    I will save this love, our love

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    Artie commented on Knowing..

    07-07-2009

    The sense of longing is very well conveyed. There is a lot of emotion in here, and it's very strong. This is very thought provoking. Nice write.
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    geauxgeaux

    07/07/2009

    Thank you so much, this was a true sense of my pain of the longing I had at the time.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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