La Santa Muerte

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    La Santa Muerte

    ..La Santa Muerte..
    ..What a wonderful name..
    ..With wonderful meaning..
    ..Comes wonderful Shame..
    ..Beauty difined..
    ..With a breeze through the night..
    ..A wonderful Death..
    ..A wonderful Fright..
    ..The shreiks of torment..
    ..Send chills down your spine..
    ..As if you were dead..
    ..Frozen in time..
    ..Scared to look back..
    ..As your eyes twitch about..
    ..Scared of the meaning..
    ..Head streaming with doubt..
    ..Your body goes cold..
    ..As my blade hits your chest..
    ..Your soul has been taken..
    ..By The Angel Of Death..




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    papapaczki commented on La Santa Muerte

    09-16-2009

    Wow... that was to the point! One small typo - "difined" should be "defined", line 5. Otherwise, great poem. I like how you set this up, explained the fear, then ended it.

    JadedGoddess commented on La Santa Muerte

    09-15-2009

    This one was great. Loved the way it flowed together. I'm adding to my favorites and giving a ten.

    Zephyr commented on La Santa Muerte

    09-02-2009

    Death is the inevitable end of existance. You, however, don't see it as the bad, terrible thing that everyone else sees. You see it as the end of the line, not to be feared, but to be appreciated. And this is what seperates the sheep from the wolves. We're wolves, you and I. Very well done, sir.

    anneliseh commented on La Santa Muerte

    06-25-2009

    really good. i love the darkness in your poems. it's really meaningful.

    FiloRozzell commented on La Santa Muerte

    04-29-2009

    Yep you did your thing on that one. I dig the broken syle at least that what I call it..You got mad skills my friend..

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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