Labrynth, I'm Lost My Love

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    This isn't much of a poem, as much as a statement. I actually wrote it for my ex.

    Labrynth, I'm Lost My Love

     I'm lost in your eyes, my love.
    A sea of lovely color.
    I'm lost in your lips, my love.
    Soft like petals of a rose.
    I'm lost in your body, my love
    It seems to summon me in the most mysterious of ways.
    I'm lost in your heart, my love.
    And I don't think I want to find my way out.

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    Nadia1986 commented on Labrynth, I'm Lost My Love

    08-03-2009

    Love is all of the many things you talk about well put.
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    laydbak1 commented on Labrynth, I'm Lost My Love

    08-03-2009

    A nice short write... Says everything about someone being the all and powerful keeper of our desires.. in only a few short lines...
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    HandsofCrimson commented on Labrynth, I'm Lost My Love

    07-20-2009

    beautiful.... absolutely beautiful. Loved every line... keep up the nice work.
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    dahlusion commented on Labrynth, I'm Lost My Love

    07-08-2009

    Wow! I am humbled over the profound beauty of this brilliantly composed master piece. It flows like a deep, clam river floating the reader along to a perfect ending.
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    Artie commented on Labrynth, I'm Lost My Love

    07-08-2009

    Nice - every time someone says they are consumed by love for a person, this is how it feels. Nice write.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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