LAST DAYS

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I originally called this "Last Hours - The Tower of London"

LAST DAYS

The days were misery
the nights were horrors
the tortures, the screams, the blood

     At last the day is here
     I walk among the people

     Sneers and anger are on their faces
     I think they are glad it is me, not them

All eyes are on  me
the humiliation will not last
the wood steps are only seven - mercifully short

     I am led, no pulled, up the stairs
     my hands tied together in front of me

Tall he stands with a hood, making me guess his identity
axe across his chest, held in his folded arms
A priest steps forward and I wave him aside
what has his Master done for me?

     The block waits before me
     it has been used many times before
     and smells of rotten blood in the sun
     My hands are untied
     and pulled behind my back

I kneel before my fate
and place my head to one side
the side I most comfortably sleep on,
and where the cuts have been made in the wood

     Gratefully I take one more breath
     At last this hell  is over

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countrypoet commented on LAST DAYS

11-26-2009

With vivid imagery and well chosen words you have created an image I can visualize in my mind as if I was present at the moment of this event.Though some people may not like the subject matter of this poem, I feel that you have taken a unique perspective on this subject and revealed a wonderful diversity in your poetic talents.

Stryx

11/27/2009

Yes, I fear many are repused by the subject and miss the story. You are more discerning. Thank you.

SavVySam commented on LAST DAYS

10-31-2009

My friend Caos128 says it best ...Kudos on this impressive historical reenactment! It is almost like we were there...Gulp!

Stryx

10/31/2009

Thanks, but it is a low number. I think people react to the theme - not the piece itself.

aggieprof commented on LAST DAYS

10-14-2009

Your range of themes and styles amazes me. You have a great talent. Kep it up.

Stryx

10/14/2009

Thanks again. It's fun isn't it?

jesusfreake commented on LAST DAYS

10-09-2009

idk how to read ur poems like this....im just so lost....this one was...great though a 10

Stryx

10/09/2009

This is life, dear one, not ick. 'It is what it is.'Thanks for your vote of confidence. You Trust - that's good.

Lolee commented on LAST DAYS

09-30-2009

Another well written poem. He sounds culpable, and bitter against God..."What has He done for me? I love the feelings that are planted in my head, by the man who is about to loose his. Great job Stryx.

Stryx

09/30/2009

Astute thinking - I appreciate that most.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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