Last Night

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    Last Night
    Last night I watch you sleeping, I traced
    every line of age-less beauty,
    I counted every breath of your dreamless peace
    Last night I stopped to steal but one –
    one breath, to fill my senses
    to relive the passion
    Last night, I crawled within your peace
    Last night – I found my future

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    KtIrish commented on Last Night

    04-19-2010

    Beautiful and perfect. I love everything about this piece. I say job very well done.
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    cousinsoren commented on Last Night

    04-19-2010

    Whoa! Halt! "It serves to intensify" ...............not ":intendify"
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    cousinsoren commented on Last Night

    04-19-2010

    A beautiful romantic idyll, Fauktlless, Is "Last night" an anaphora? It serves, obviously to intendify the pathos of the piece and to sustain the theme of adoration. My rating for over-all faultlessness and musicality is 10+ ..
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    NevillePark commented on Last Night

    01-20-2010

    Sanctuary! Love is a meadow in our backyard. We don't necessarily need to run around in like a kid in to enjoy it. Sometimes we can sit quietly and rest in the being - assured of the doing part being there.
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    laydbak1 commented on Last Night

    07-24-2009

    Yes, a very nicely done short piece of work here... Great imagery with the watching her sleep and all the good that came from those few powerfully reflective and reminiscent moments there...
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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