Last Summer

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    Last Summer

    Those songs playing again and again, 
    drifting lazily through open windows,
    the car stereo, your smiling, whistling neighbor.
    The ones replayed too many times,
    the ones you never really liked all that much,
    but you swore you'd never wipe them from your mind.
    The candle with the smell of summer,
    of love and laughter and lonely cries,
    the one that just smells like cuts and music,
    the one that reminds you of the tan,
    zebra striped sheets and late nights awake,
    turning the pages of another book
    and playing with drippy blue wax.
    Tan, bare feet hanging out the car window,
    dangling in front of the rear view mirror
    as you sing to those same songs.
    Red bull and React gum,
    the black kind that will forever remind you
    of last summer,
    the kind you'll taste months later
    and be taken straight back to days on the beach,
    nights with friends, by yourself,
    just drinking in the shaved legs and midnight talks
    and inu449 Youtube videos,
    the suntan lotion and sand between your toes,
     and the feeling of pure July sliding through your veins.
    Banana popsicles and too many unsent letters,
    humid air so thick you could swim through it,
    just hoping for winter.
    Sun on your eyelids, at an hour much too late for sleeping.
    Decorated with bug bites and cuts and fake tattoos,
    the ones you put on with your best friend in a movie theater bathroom,
    the butterfly tramp stamp before you saw that movie,
    the one that'll make you think of last summer.
    It's just how it is,
    and this year'll be the same.
    Maybe a bit less innocent,
    maybe a little more deceit, a few more lies,
    but it should be
    a hell of a time.  

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    angelchaser commented on Last Summer

    02-05-2011

    See, broken? I never would have thought of writing somehting like this, don't ever doubt your talent as a writer. I'll say this till I'm blue in the face, you're an amazing girl with an amazing talent, honey. Don't ever stop gifting the world with your writing.

    brokenhearted11

    02/05/2011

    thank you(; i wont, i hope. i love writing. well see i heard this song that just made me thigk of last summer and i watched an inu449 video and lit my blue candle and it all just came flooding back

    cliftondurant commented on Last Summer

    02-02-2011

    I like it broken we all have those memories of special time a good job thanks for sharing

    brokenhearted11

    02/02/2011

    thank you! memories are the best. seriously.

    Redhead505 commented on Last Summer

    02-02-2011

    It's amazing how many past summers that your poem unearthed for me.

    brokenhearted11

    02/02/2011

    i'm so glad! thats what i was going for, whether the memories be amazing or painful or both, i was hoping to bring them up. thanks for the read!

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