LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

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  • ladypooh
  • I am back,stronger and better. I have truely missed everyone,and I will be writting soon God bless each and everyone.

Poem Commentary

This started out in a friend request, that's where Laughing together as friends got it's birth. from this point it's a shout out to all of my friends that I have gain here at Original Poetry.com. I had to go through a lot to learn how to be a friend and the reward was that I would draw friends. this is truely a blessing as I read the poems, I share the feelings of each and every ones life. and I feel a strong family growing together here.

LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

Before I start I must confess
A friend I didn't know how to truely be
because the trust was took out of me.
I had a heart that was torn
A soul that use to mourn.

Then Jesus took control
For the Sorrow he gave me
Comfort
Hurt--Love
Confusion--Peace
 The Loniness--Joy
Sadness--Laughter
Doubt--Trust

Taught me how to be a friend
and to trust again.

As poets we share our story of the same
and the new life we gain.

Now for me nothings the same, for today a blessed
friend have I gained

Though face to face we have not yet met
still our spirits connect
filled with
Love, Joy, Peace, Gentleness, Goodness
Faith and Meekness

For I know the fruit of the spirit you possess
when we started this quest
Today a new relationship has began

Laughing Together As Friends

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WJduke commented on LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

04-26-2010

Hey younglady; Ladypooh-when the AllMighty shine his light on u we are to embrace that moment and share it as a blessing, this is a real-nice poem, verytouching and you are to be rewarded another realm of uplifting spirituality for your thought's...

ladypooh

04/26/2010

Thank you very much for your heart felt word.

GentleT commented on LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

08-08-2009

The one who can change your life and when your against the wall on him you can call. God Bless.

ladypooh

08/08/2009

Thank you for your comment.

cmlestrade commented on LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

07-23-2009

Ladypooh every day you grow as a poet. I love your works and the truth in them. I know we all have to look out for grammar and spelling but that evolves as we grow. I am sometimes lazy and don't check spelling and grammar as I type. I look at the poems emotion first and yours are filled with emotion. keep writing you have found your niche.

ladypooh

07/23/2009

thank you for your heartfelt comment.

frog commented on LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

07-22-2009

This poem really made me feel valued. Your writing is evolving and becoming more focused. I admire you as a person because you are so genuine; and it comes out in your writing. Thank you for sharing it.

ladypooh

07/23/2009

Thank you frog, for your insight and comment. be bless

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

ladypooh’s Poems (18)

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In The Mist Of It All 3
Shadows of Life 1
LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS 4
WHAT HAVE WE DONE ??? WHAT HAVE WE DONE ??? 6
A Recipe For Healing Scars of Abuse : 4
THE CREATION 5
UNMASKING THE PAIN 3
HAVE YOU HEARD 8
A TALK WITH GOD 4
THE DANCE WITH THE DEVIL CALL THE SHACKLE SHUFFLE 3
THE HOME GOING FOR COCAINE -- 1993-2005 4
WHEN I DANCE 3
IT WAS HIS LOVE 2
INSIDE A BROKEN HEART 3
FAMILY TREE 4
In A Mother's Cry 6
SOMEDAY 4
THE CHILD THAT DIDN'T GROW 5