Lauren

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    Imagine the sky in the darkest of night,
    Without a single star insight,
    Now add the sun.

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    frog commented on Lauren

    08-16-2009

    Wonderful visuals on this one. I love how you put such a big poem in such a little tiny space.
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    MCross

    08/19/2009

    Thank you so much for the words of encouragement.

    mistyparish commented on Lauren

    03-20-2009

    short and sweet, I like.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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