Laurens View

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Laurens View

Lauren's View
I open my eyes to a work of art,
A Painting.

The canvas is the same;
But the semitre is oh so different.

So polished were the ornate imagies
carved into this esquit gold frame.

The porcelin beginnings were so smooth,
That the two cultured pearls that viewed me,
seemed as if gravity held them there.

Warm,
As the sun was my take on her depth.

This Painting was true mastery.

For so rarely do our inner parts
grow beyond our Beauty.

But, I saw it.
Because she stood before Me.

Priceless in worth is my Love!


TREVON

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Whiskers commented on Laurens View

12-31-2011

A beautiful presentation of a heart full of love for that special person. Blessings and thanks for sharing, Whiskers.

ginga commented on Laurens View

07-07-2009

A symbolic and truly precious way to depict a love. I love the pearl images as well. Ginga

jademelissa74 commented on Laurens View

06-19-2009

The content of this poem is powerful, beautiful and sincere. The interpretation of true love that you decipher in this piece is easy to follow and appreciate. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it! God bless!

TREVON

10/06/2009

Thank you for the praise. I am glad you found joy in it

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

TREVON’s Poems (40)

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Title Comments
Norlene 2
ANGEL 4
When 1
Lost Heart 0
Bay 0
Bay 0
MY STEPS 2
MESSENGER 2
Messenger 1
Lord 1
My Treasure 1
My Beginnings 1
My Tears 0
Grace 0
God Man's Lost 1
There no place like home. 1
My Prayer 2
Missing 2
My Lord 1
There's no place like Home 0
Eve 1
Autumn 2
Jean 1
Dad 2
Crimesome Tide 2
Pastor 4
A Beginning 1
Misses Crosby 1
Thus 2
Creation 2
Not Enough 1
Chess pieces in the Game 0
A Great Hill 1
No Reasons 1
On My Way 2
My dawn 3
January 3
Laurens View 3
Tiger in the Mist 2
These days 1