Lay Me Down Upon Petals

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    Lay Me Down Upon Petals

    Lay me down upon petals,

    Softly caress my hair,

    Tell me things that make me smile,

    Take away every care,

     

    Lay me down upon petals,

    Softly kiss my lips,

    Look into my eyes,

    As your head slowly dips,

     

    Lay me down upon petals,

    Softly rub my thigh,

    All the while whispering,

    Those words that make me sigh,

     

    Lay me down upon petals,

    Softly hold my heart,

    Handle it with love and care,

    For you,myself I part.

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    redbloodink commented on Lay Me Down Upon Petals

    01-09-2010

    The petals of love... the flower of romance....... the longing to be held and cared for through the night....... loved it.... red

    Rygar commented on Lay Me Down Upon Petals

    01-08-2010

    lovely hun, simply lovely, your a true artist. i a m impressed.

    danmartyjake1 commented on Lay Me Down Upon Petals

    01-07-2010

    Definately a great write, extremely sensual without getting too gritty. I love that and your an eloquent writer.

    calliope

    01/07/2010

    Thank you,yes i try to be erotic without the raunchy,graphic,language

    Rhymer commented on Lay Me Down Upon Petals

    01-07-2010

    A lot of poets write poetry about love and the act of love, but yours is extremely well done. Very vivid imagery a 10 from me

    dahlusion commented on Lay Me Down Upon Petals

    10-14-2009

    Sweet in all of its poetic expression, and filled with wishes of sensual ecstasy.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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