“Z” ..... My Unexpected

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sometimes love finds you in the least likely of ways, and sometimes in a form so unexpected, and you think you know what you what , you wait, you look, you date, all the time with this ideal person in mind, and then one day ...................................... you find this rare person who is everything you didnt know you wanted or needed.

“Z” ..... My Unexpected

“Z”

I sit alone in this world so full of light, yet I’m always in the dark

But I suddenly see him my beautiful dark light, Come to save me from this eternal night!

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He sees me like no other, yet my pain is so evident and clear,

My ravaged soul, my bodies weak, and a pain unlike his own.

A mirror image of damaged souls destined to meet, we just didn’t know.

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He is my unexpected the one thing I never knew I wanted, but now I know I can’t live without.

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So much sadness and sorrow in his eyes, and the pain is etched on his face,

So how does he always manage to look at me with a loving tenderness that makes my heart race?

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But his pain reflects mine so I see past his disguise, past the wall he built to keep life and love out.

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But I want him to know I see "HIM”, and I am not afraid of all he is,

No matter his past, or circumstance, I want him to know I’m all in.

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His past don't matter, he was a child, a child who made mistakes.

A life lost to the system where he suffered alone, atrocities unspeakable, until he was finally let go.

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But I want him to know he’s no longer alone, and no longer has to suffer this pain in silence.

Your ghosts of your past and nightmares be damned, my Love will wipe out the violence.

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All you have to do is say Yes, and take my hand.

We will leave this place of desolation and devastation together, and all the pain will be gone forever.

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Now onto the future, and all tomorrow has to offer no matter what it will bring,

But we will do it, and we will survive, because we will be together.

-Bree                                       To "Zon" with Love 2011'

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

BreeLove’s Poems (83)

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I "SEE YOU" 1
Sleepless night 0
Never Too Late 0
Take Heed 0
A Mothers Love Knows No Bounds 0
BABY BOI 2
HER SHADOW AND ME 0
Precious Baby Boy 1
SHE FINALLY FOUND HER REASON 3
Love Is...........
.......
1
Untitled WTD5 1
Untitled WTD4 1
Untitled WTD3 0
Untitled WTD2 0
Untitled WTD1 0
Let Go and Let God 0
KEEPER OF THE KEY 0
With Love 1
Done 3
Loudest Silence 4
JUST DON’T CARE ANYMORE 3
So Damn Confused - (continued) : Its She 2
Making Love 4
Dawn of a New Day 0
Love You Enough 2
Friend 1
How is new Love to Grow, If your not willing to Just let go?? 1
Your Love 1
Tis A Pirates Life For Me 0
WORDS 1
My Pearl 0
Master Plan 0
Do you see what I feel 2
~Courage Under Fire~ 2
God's Will Not Ours 2
Monsters Are Real 10
GRAY MATTER 1
untitled 12.11.2011 1
Zon 0
Life Without You 1
“Z” ..... My Unexpected 0
My Future 3
HE’S A MYSTERY 5
WHO LOST 1
KNOWS NO END 0
Beautiful Black Man 4
So Damn Confused 4
Only for a Season 2
Hmmmm........
. I Wonder
3
Vicious Circles 2
Reflection 1
Just Sex 7
Thank You 2
Far From Perfect 2
Do You Think Of Me 1
My Sweet Jamaica 2
Drama Free 1
Betrayed 1
Don't Go Away 1
I AM AND ALWAYS WILL BE YOUR FRIEND 1
Lies 1
Happily Ever After 1
NEW ....... 1
But Only Time Will Tell..... 1
I WONDER 1
Why ? 1
Life 1
NEVER CHANGING 1
Lying Eyes 1
No She Won't Cry 2
NEVER MEANT TO BE 3
DEATHS WARM EMBRACE 1
Our Love Was Real To Me 1
SOMEDAY 2
THE GAME 1
SET ME FREE 2
A Lost Love 1
For Hunter with Love 1
DO UNTO OTHERS 1
Sweet Dreams 1
YOUNG LOVE YOUNG LOVER 2
IN THE END 1
My King of Kings 3