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    learnt

    a black spider is crawling
    on the bed
    while it makes some horrifying
    sound,
    today there is no scape,
    she was talking to herself
    trying to gather some courage
    and also she is curious too
    so many young and old
    black and white men
    after her
    all of them wanted to
    say something
    in private
    finally the time for the private
    talk comes,
    not bad, she thinks, when the
    function begin
    it is nothing but pure
    love
    what is the sin in it
    if two of the human souls
    want each other
    to take and to give
    but she did not know
    what is the next
    untill she lost the
    last chance to save herself
    from the hands of an old
    when the storm is over
    she only could feel the tornedo
    which just have
    busted her
    later much later
    she learnt the word
    rape. 

     

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    Hampton commented on learnt

    07-12-2009

    A raw and interesting write full of word pictures of the subject of the poem being lured into the ugliness of rape.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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