leaving my burrdens at the door

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leaving my burrdens at the door

dear god
i just dont know if i can do it anymore
life is getting to me
and im strugglin
just tryin to keep my head afloat
tryin to do right and keep up hope
but i dont know how much longer i can
stand this rocky boat
they say you dont give us more then we can handle
well right now  i got ten weights on my back
tryin hard to hold me back
and worse i got twenty on my mind
tryin to pull me down all the time
so here i am knocking at your door
lettin you know i cant do this anymore
i need strength lord
i'm getting weak
please help me get where i need to be
get my mind right
and help me fly striaght
cuz right now i couldn't even get my feet off the ground
dear god i'm here
please help your child
im hurting and i need some healing
i just dont know if i can do it anymore
love your child
just trying to leave my burrdens at the door

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blueberry commented on leaving my burrdens at the door

02-13-2010

I know how that can feel at times. But it's best to be wise and leave your burdens behind, have faith, and keep your head up. Nice poem.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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