Let Down Again

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    Poem Commentary

    an older one I dredged up, but it feels appropriate today...

    Let Down Again

     Let Down Again

    Another day on this spinning sphere
    Another empty heart splashes by
    Another flash of lightning knocks me down
    It doesn't end, the colors keep mixing
    And won't hold still...

    You are an ignorant genius
    Waiting for life to bowl you over
    Waiting for perfection
    Ceaselessly pacing...

    But you're alone in your cage
    And you've passed it many times by now.

    MLS

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Let Down Again

    09-20-2010

    touche` this have the perfect flow of a well crafted poem..........love the message as well.
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    bloomingsun

    09/20/2010

    Thank you, so glad to hear you enjoyed this.

    Charlie23 commented on Let Down Again

    01-13-2010

    I love this, just everything about it is so perfectly said! Very nice poem!
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    bloomingsun

    01/13/2010

    Thanks so much, your words and time are much appreciated... Thank you for reading and stopping by.

    redbloodink commented on Let Down Again

    12-27-2009

    I no longer wait on perfection..... I never will be..... I use to wait on perfection of me..... I'm glad I found that in Jesus.... He was, He is, and He will always be perfect...... I use to let it all pass me by..., now I just try to take it in...... red
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    bloomingsun

    12/27/2009

    Yes, accept that we cannot find perfection in this world or in this life. But in the next... Thanks for reading!!

    tierra7 commented on Let Down Again

    12-27-2009

    Lady BloomingSun, you are an amazin'm soul ..i can comprehend these words to the highest degree...mostly out of my own expectations of myself....you have a desired style in your creation..that are birthed from your hearts spirit..thumbs up !!! .Namaste...Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )
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    bloomingsun

    12/27/2009

    Terra, thank you. Your inspirational words are much appreciated. Peace...

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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