Let Go

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  • Letting Go

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    To let go was the greatest gift I could give myself. Before the moment I decided to let go, it just seemed like endless suffering.

    Let Go

    I fell apart the day my heart broke,
    My tears left the pillow to soak,
    Anger crosses with pain,
    My heart drives my mind insane,
    Moments seem to last to long,
    An endless repeat of my break-up replays in my mind like an annoying song,
    Everything seems gray,
    The question arises, what need is there for another day,
    Through my tears and my sorrow,
    I see a beautiful smile of tomorrow,
    As I look and pray,
    I listen to hear what God might say,
    Let the pain wash over you,
    Accept the hurt you are going through,
    I hear the voice tell me to accept to let go,
    Listen to my heart, and I will know,
    The answer is to stop holding on to then,
    What happen has already been, 
    I smile for today,
    Because the pain has faded into yesterday,
    The voice was right,
    I need to stop holding on to nothing so tight,
    What had went so wrong was in the past,
    I realized the pain did not last,
    And every now and again the voice reminds me to let go,
    Just accept and let go.

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    frog commented on Let Go

    05-03-2013

    This poem has great emotion in it. It describes the process very well. I enjoyed reading it.

    Wakeitha commented on Let Go

    06-09-2012

    Excellent written and explanding yes alot of us could related to this beautiful poem. Just rememer your special in the eyes of the Behold.(God). No one can love you the way you really desire like christ Jesus. Once you give it to him and let him love you then you will no what you deserve from love.Keep your head up and trust in the must high.God Bless

    Kingwebstar commented on Let Go

    06-08-2012

    Love this poem that is so true about letting go.Even though it can be so hard to do at times.But not impossible.The past was a learning experience .The present and the future reflects what we do now. You have my support. Love Da KinG

    mufasa commented on Let Go

    01-29-2012

    Well and written and eloquent, words we can all relate to .

    shywoodrose commented on Let Go

    01-16-2012

    This is excellent! A perfect example of why we need tp share our poetry, this helped me. Thank you ♥

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    BrokenHeart2009’s Poems (33)

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    A Crush 1
    Waiting For An Answer 2
    Creepy 3
    Question 2
    Endless Fall 2
    Men Are People 26
    Final Words 11
    A Gift to Mankind 6
    Together We Say Goodbye 6
    Your Wife 9
    No One to Save Me From The Dark 5
    In The Beginning 3
    You And Me 1
    My Daughters 7
    Lonely 4
    Don't Leave 2
    The Sounds of a Broken Heart 4
    Regret 7
    Twisted 7
    Hold Your Vows 4
    Love's Bite 3
    Shame On Me For Being With You 11
    The Kiss's Coal 2
    You Reap What You Sow 5
    In Love With A Lie 5
    My Story 5
    Warning 2
    Leave Me 2
    What Do We DO? 3
    Goodbye and a Smile 3
    Adultery's Shame 4
    The Sound of No One 3