Let me be

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let me be

Let me be

Every time I see your face,
I wanna run, but i'm stuck in place.
The memories are haunting me,
Oh the memories that had yet to be.
You left me out, alone and cold,
but this heart of mine, you still hold.
Your ghost is chasing me,
I wish it would cease to be.
My soul is bleeding on the floor,
and you hide behind these stupid doors.
Come now, please rescue me,
I need you, can't you see?
Every time I see your face,
I scream and I want to run from this place.
Those haunting memories are hurting me,
and those DAMN memories that didnt get to be.
When you left you took my sanity,
please, love, just let me be.
Let me be,
please, love,
Let me be

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tykehall commented on Let me be

01-04-2010

nicely written like the flow as well as the feeling of it

Tempy commented on Let me be

11-23-2009

DAMN MR i'm gonna leave a mystery comment and just rate it

BrokenAndrew

11/23/2009

Well thank you :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

BrokenAndrew’s Poems (13)

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