let me help

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    let me help

    I wonder why
    you cry
    in the shadows of your room
    is it because everyone says you are doomed
    why do you hold it inside
    and let your feelings hide
    i think its a shame
    that you are in pain
    but i can help
    and act as your saftey belt
    but you just make us all wonder
    why cant we help you little brother
    i know im young but im not dumb
    i know how you feel
    i know its a big deal
    its hard to watch you cry
    and all i can do is stand on the side

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    kittman101 commented on let me help

    07-01-2009

    Yea thats a weakness i have. I cant watch people cry because my heart goes out to them and i too will cry. My conscious is my guide as the voices come from indies. and i know when the pain is real, because its other people pain that i truly feel.

    PoeticMind commented on let me help

    11-20-2008

    YOU'S A BIG PERSON ON FAMILY AFFAIRS...

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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