Let Us See
Transformative!
a simple sunray
illuminates the obvious depths
... of love
the Creator exhibits
for His creatures
Artistry beyond compare
on clear display, everywhere
for those...
who can see
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Let Us See
4 Comments
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stefy commented on Let Us See
05-18-2010
- Very interesting and deep...............................................................
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05/18/2010
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gogant commented on Let Us See
04-19-2010
- Sometimes one cannot see the trees for the forest, but if will just admire what is here, without complexities, the beauty is only a blink away.................A nice poem you have given us, Bloom.......
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04/21/2010
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Springsize commented on Let Us See
04-18-2010
- I enjoy your simple poem, clear to read and understand, and the message... a light of Love from our Creator... the gift of sun... and then you use the wide-range camera view of "artistry... on clear display" ... so I am now going to imagine a sunrise that is magnificent... and is free and is a reverent thing and goes by every single day, and can be unnoticed by so many inside their walls that also block the rays. So very nice, how much I find your poem suggests to me...
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04/19/2010
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SavVySam commented on Let Us See
04-18-2010
- One of those special and rare aha moments for "those who can see" the beauty of his bountiful blessings...lovely!;)
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04/19/2010
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