Lets go to Subway

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Lets go to Subway

My Sweet porcelain queen,
Silently starring into space,
What we had was special.
Soft, cold, vanilla flesh
Against your chocolate warrior.
Sharing silhouettes
In the morning time,
The mistake was mine.
I should have never let you in.
I should have been faithful
'till the end.

Nicole had a right to know,
I should have told her.
Instead you showed her, our spot.
Your all i have left now
So i will give you my all.
My joy and my pain.
I will spoil you
With perishable diamonds,
you throat and wrist will drip ruby's.
I will take from you
what you hold dear
As you have done to me.

Never mind, I aint a killer
But don't push me.
Revenge is like the sweetest joy
Next to getting Subway.

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saveaheart commented on Lets go to Subway

06-01-2009

I really like this poem. It's very descriptive and different. My favorite part is the part about the diamonds and rubies.

Footprints2002 commented on Lets go to Subway

03-14-2009

Very Deep. Good Job

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

MCross’s Poems (13)

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