Lets Just Escape

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

Poem Commentary

Sometimes life is hard to bare and you want to escape to a place with clean air.

Lets Just Escape

I hear you crying deep in the night
Take my had I’ll show you the star lights
So much indifference in this life
So much pain and troubled strife

Feel the warmth inside my heart
A love society could not pull apart
Let the rain wash away todays sin
A cleansing power to begin again

Leave the voice of prejudice, unheard
Let the the wind hear our spoken words
Of love so pure is the power of its existence
Leave behind any and all resistance

Seek shelter with my heart in the mountains
Seek the splendor of its glorious
grandeur
We can live and love within her grace
Lets climb to the top and bless this place

Leave behind all the worlds bitter hate
Disappear in the mountains to find our fate
Escape the cities crime and grime
Breath deep the mountain air, like sweet lime

I’ve had enough of this worlds terrible pain
Dead child lays in the street, who’s to blame
Take my hand, lets escape this horrible confusion
The mountain is our place, mother nature created no illusions

Written by
Asha
2010

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WordSlinger commented on Lets Just Escape

08-14-2010

Ok here you go again with this beautiful nature poetry, making me want to go camping , and never come back, love it ty WS

ApaqRasgirl

08/14/2010

you are welcome dear,,,,I am glad you enjoyed it......but be warned the last one might bring a tear.........thanks for the sweet comment...loves ya asha

jeanpnkldyg commented on Lets Just Escape

08-13-2010

what beautiful flow this has..at times looking back at what needs to be left behind to the glorious comfort of being in God's country.

ApaqRasgirl

08/14/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment...I am happy that you enjoyed it..........loves ya asha

kdarcy commented on Lets Just Escape

08-13-2010

Love it, several typos doesn't take away from its meaning. How we all need to escape, if only to remember something better, be well

ApaqRasgirl

08/13/2010

thank you dear for the wonderful comment, glad you liked it......love asha

cheronld commented on Lets Just Escape

08-13-2010

What a truly beautiful poem my friend....the artistry that you painted was breathless....this sounds like a place one can go to and just release all inhibitions...nicely done....as for GREGSTER..at this point all that can be said is GROW UP....someone once told me that if you look for darkness in every situation....you shouldn't be surprised when it takes you over....Tread carefully young man....don't look for things that are not there...as you would want others to take your writing at face value...you should do the same for everyone else...great one Asha...Cher

ApaqRasgirl

08/13/2010

thank you again dear cher, for your wonderful sweet comment,,,,,writing about nature is one of my things and today was just a day I felt all the cruelty and sorrow in the world, which inspired these two write.....and the comments inspired my latest piece.....'Her Grace"........thank, enjoy,,,,,,and loves ya asha

angel33614 commented on Lets Just Escape

08-13-2010

wow, simply breath taking, bravo! I know these moutains you speak of like the back of my hands, driven everyroad in and out, seen every waterfall and cavern, and still I am admazed and in utter awe of the power and true beauty of the smokies, there is no place like it I have ever seen. Each time I visit it is beauty reborn, with each season, with each year, the moutains change and grow, each time more beautiful than the last! I can see and feel that much of your inspiration and inner beauty you have found in these mountains. An escape like no other, a place of just pure beauty and admazement! I remember one day coming across the new foundland gap, way high above the clouds, I remember driving and seeing a sight I will never forget. I pulled over the car which i do more times than I can count when driving in the mountains. I walked out on a little bridge over looking the carvern beblow thousands of feet above, there was this blue midst in a callage of different hues, it was truely breath taking. You picture you used is that exact view, except for one thing, no picture can ever do it justice, it is like peaking into the clouds of heaven, pearing through the key hole of the pearly gates, there are no words to describe it, just leaves you speachless and in utter awe. A place such as this is the closest one can come to heaven without walking through the gate. It is the greatest esacpe I have found from the darkness, pain, and chaos of the city and of society in general. When you are standing there in the mountains over looking such a sight you feel all you worries disappear, all your troubles, stresses, they all just vanish. You feel like you are the only person in the whole world, but not alone, one with nature in all its glory. Truely beautiful poem my dea friend, brought back many a found memories!!! Can't wait to get back there and get lost in the beauty all over again. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility your dear friend ANGEL

ApaqRasgirl

08/13/2010

thank you my dear angel for all those sweet words....yes I will agree whole heartly that there is nothing more beautiful then those mountains....and as I have often said, no one can paint a picture as beautiful as mother nature herself....I am missing those mountains and my son a lot.........hey have a read the one I just posted,,,,,,inspired by the comments of this one.......lol....called "Her Grace"...........then you will know me well..and maybe he will get the picture.....lol......loves ya asha

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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