Lets Open Our Wings

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    • cheezchic
    • Lead with your soul and be proud for some have not even a heart

    Poem Commentary

    This is an analogy on how two people should be in a relationship.

    Lets Open Our Wings

    My wings, wrapped around, to Protect Me
    I open them wide and invite YOU to See...

    Naked I stand before you, Nothing to Hide
    Come to Me and stand by My Side...

    Let me show you what True Inner Beauty is
    For I am Unique and Rare, I Promise YOU this...

    I don't just want to "Want You" this is True
    I want to grow together and know "I Need You"...

    Open your wings to ME and Show me Inside
    Show me all of YOU, Nothing to Hide...

    Trust in Yourself to show the Inner Beauty
    For this is what Matters Most to ME...

    I hope that You won't just "Want Me"
    But that Some Day, YOU will "Need Me Completely"...

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    oneloveALZ commented on Lets Open Our Wings

    02-15-2011

    Very deep poem I feel all of your emotion. This is what makes me love poetry so much.
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    Olan01 commented on Lets Open Our Wings

    11-16-2010

    ...said the spider to the fly, lol. Good poem; I side-step as I pass by. Olan.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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